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Born at dawn with a soul that's split in half
One was sullen and the other you can't hear its laugh
Roses and rainbows and everything that's nice
It rips them apart with a heart that's made of ice
Don't be deceived from the other side of the mirror
It's a raging demon with a mind that'll never be clearer
Echos of my screaming voice fills the land
Everyone turned deaf not a soul reaching their hand
The wrath of my demon goes beyond
For every soul that haven't respond
The weeping of my wounded angel is ignored
They sealed its weary vocal cord
They question my insanity
But i'm damned because of their humanity
They are greedy selfish creatures
That haven't learned anything from their teachers
One was sullen and the other you can't hear its laugh
Roses and rainbows and everything that's nice
It rips them apart with a heart that's made of ice
Don't be deceived from the other side of the mirror
It's a raging demon with a mind that'll never be clearer
Echos of my screaming voice fills the land
Everyone turned deaf not a soul reaching their hand
The wrath of my demon goes beyond
For every soul that haven't respond
The weeping of my wounded angel is ignored
They sealed its weary vocal cord
They question my insanity
But i'm damned because of their humanity
They are greedy selfish creatures
That haven't learned anything from their teachers
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Who I Am, What I Feel
Do you ever get the feeling,
Of existentialism?
I do,
And it's driven me insane since 2006.
Yes, I get nervous.
Yes, I get nostalgic.
Yes, I get scared.
No, I have not felt that surreal, genuine thing yet.
Not what you thought,
Much different.
Don't feel sorry,
Come over and help me. Unlike the others I told.
Unless you've been through what I've been in,
Don't you dare call me selfish,
Don't you dare make me feel ashamed.
You have no business with me.
Don't tell me,
You got it worse than me.
I'm sorry bout' that but,
I need help now.
I can't speak to them,
I get a little bit nervous but I will crumble in humility.
I can't go out,
It's t
Literature
The Demons Inside Us
We all have something nestled inside of us
Besides the light that shines within
There is another power amidst the good face we show
It hides in the shadows of our mind
Completely unknown to us
Only provoked when we look to hell for help
Scratching their way through of minds
They take over and control our bodies
We are no longer the human we once were
Our eyes have blackened with hate
A foul odor possesses our voice
From which we are thrown from our minds
Into a corner
Watching as Hades makes us lose control
Until we completely lose our vision to reality
Then once they have finished their job
Giving our bodies back to us once more
Opening one
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Stop Hurting, Please
Let me take your burdens upon my own back.
Remove your pack filled with pain
And let it instead stain my face.
Wrap your arms around me in an embrace and watch your emotion
Wash over me like an ocean-leaving me raw
So that the pain that I saw is no longer yours.
Instead it pours down like a stream,
Down my throat where it becomes a scream that goes unheard
So that your pain remains curbed inside me.
I, too, hurt, though I don’t wish you to see so instead I bleed
On paper so that the seed sown doesn’t sprout quite so painfully.
When you smile it fills me wonderfully and I don’t feel quite so ground
By the sounds of sor
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This has a very deep and powerful message, and I can relate wholeheartedly to it. Things like this happen everyday and people either remain ignorant of this kind of behavior or they are the ones who are delving it out themselves.
The only things that you could work on would be the grammar:
-'Everyone turned deff not a soul reaching their hand', This could easily be changed to 'Everyone turned deaf and not a soul reaching their hand' or you could put a comma between deaf and not.
-'For every soul that haven't respond' could be changed to 'For every soul that did not respond'
Now this one's only a suggestion: In 'They sealed its weary vocal cord' you could add 'have' in between 'They' and 'sealed'
Anyways, I loved the poem, and I can't wait to see more from you! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="349" title="Aww"/>